Monday, March 22, 2010
The start of term two!
Okay term one's over, the holiday's over too! I chose LA as one of my ace subject so i am going to work extra hard on my blog. So today, we meet Mr Lundberg again, the first thing he said was that the lit-test was post-poned to week two, Yay! He also teched us the dos and don'ts of writing an essay, there was much to learn as many things are different from primary school's. Based on my term one's results i believe that i must work really hard this term to improve my grades for LA.
Monday, March 1, 2010
Why my ending?
Basically, i chose the tiger for my ending because the story described the young man and the young woman having an affair more than describing the princess and young man's love for each other. So i thought that this would be a better ending. The story also stress alot on descrbing the princess as a babaric one, so i suggested this ending. Another thing is that i feel that the princess is a very selfish person, due to the fact that she said if she cannot have the young man, no one else can have him. With influence from her father, the king, i think that this ending is a more reasonable one.
Tiger!! Not lady!!

Right at that very moment, a ferocious tiger prowled onto the man. The man gave a final stare at the princess, tears rushing out. A man shedding tears, something so powerful, so mighty, the sense of betrayer. That is what have the power to make a strong young man shed tears. The tiger devoured the man, his head landed on the ground, tears that dripped looked like fallen leaves, never able to feel life again. The princess, gave an evil smile, what was that that could overcome a love that was between two brave people, brave enough to disobey the King's law. Its jealousy, it can overcome one's mind, make one kill someone that was like their other half. The princess instructed her subjects to open the other door. The men opened the door and scrambled off. Light shone on the young lady, she raised her head and gave a big smile, opening her eys big and taking big steps out of the door. Soon, her smile turned into a timid scared face. The tiger, got off the young man and preyed the young lady. The princess sat on her throne and and gave an evil laughter that would make no human-being have the courage to offend this babaric princess.
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