Saturday, April 2, 2011

Jack and Jill

Firstly, I will rewrite the Jack and Jill nursery rhyme into a letter.
Dear Parents of Jack and Jill,
Your son and daughter, Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a pail of water. I knew I should not have let two mere children to fetch a pail of water, I was very busy with sewing then remembered I had to boil water. Jack unfortunately fell down the hill and broke his crown, his condition has gotten better and is now resting. Jill also fell down but only suffered cuts and bruises, she is fit and well and is now taking care of Jack. Jack was a very brave boy, despite his broken crown, he could still get up himself and made his way back home himself. As I was busy sewing, I did not notice his injury. Therefore, he bound his head all by himself with vinegar and brown paper, it is quite smart of him is it not? Do try to come back home.

My Apologies.

Yours Sincerely,
Caretaker of Jack and Jill

Next, I will be rewriting it into a Diary entry.
Dear Diary,
Today, on the 1st of April in the year 2011, I followed Jack up the hill outside my house to fetch a pail of water. As we were skipping merrily down the hill, Jack got tripped by a rock and fell down the hill and broke his crown. Shocked, I lost my balance and fell down along with him, only that my injuries are only cuts and bruises, not as bad as the ones Jack has. As long as I turned to Jack's direction, I saw him already on his feet and capering back home surprisingly fast. I then got on my feet and headed for Jack's home to see how he was. Then at the door, I saw Jack's Aunt Mary, she told me that as long as Jack got home, he went to bed and bound his head with vinegar and brownp paper. She also told me that Jack needs a rest and I should visit him another day. Today was eventful and unforgetable, I hope that Jack is fine and we could play together again soon.

Love,
Jill

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